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Poetas Dienamiegok arba Jei būičau S. Nėris

Manęs dar nebuvo -
Alyvos žydėjo - -
Manęs nebebus jau -
Jos vėliai žydės -

Ir kris jų lapeliai
Nuo saulės ir vėjo,
Kaip smėlio saujelės,
Ant mano širdies -

S. Nėris

Manęs dar nebuvo -
Lietuviai gyveno - -
Manęs nebebus jau -
Bet Cvirka padės -

Ir kris Lietuvaičiai
Nuo Stalino saulės,
Kaip vodkos lašeliai,
Ant mano širdies -

C. Dienamiegok

Katik atradau eilinį savo talentą. Perskaitęs čia, per kokias 6 minutes parašiau mačios Salomėjos Nėries vertą eilėraštį! Gal į mokyklų programą mane įtrauks… Apie lyrinį subjektą kalbėt nereikia, ar ne?

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    Meli rašė,

    2010-01-10 @ 11:25

    Nu nais. Tu tikras poetas. Šaunuolis ;) Gali tiesiog viešinti savo kūrybą. :D

  2. 2

    dienamiegok rašė,

    2010-01-10 @ 14:24

    Jau paviešinau :)

    Istorija patinka?

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    lu rašė,

    2010-01-11 @ 00:43

    kodel nekenti neries?

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    dienamiegok rašė,

    2010-01-11 @ 18:31

    Nes ji tiesiogiai prisidėjo prie Lietuvių žudymo, trėmimo, tautos naikinimo, 40 metų trukusio valstybės regreso ir t.t. ir pan. Kaip ir alkoholikas Cvirka.

  5. 5

    Meli rašė,

    2010-01-12 @ 14:30

    Ne taip išsireiškiau, nu turiu omeny viešint ne tik BLOG’e :D

  6. 6

    dienamiegok rašė,

    2010-01-12 @ 18:30

    Kad nėra ką viešinti :/

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    pasiutinta rašė,

    2010-01-20 @ 01:42

    E gera metafora - žiū:
    aš vartoju alkoholį - vodka laša ant mano širdies (na, atseit, aš prijaučiu alkoholiui). Nais

  8. 8

    dienamiegok rašė,

    2010-01-20 @ 01:47

    Na taip, nemanau, kad reikia papildomo aiškinimo ;]


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    pasiutinta rašė,

    2010-01-20 @ 12:51

    Tai aš neaiškinu, aš gi pasakiau kas man pasirodė, ką įžvelgiau, gi tu gali ir visai kitą reikšmę turėt galvoj

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    2010-01-25 @ 20:50

    S.Nėris ir liks Salomėja. O kad ji pridėjo prie jų, tai jos didžiulė klaida, nepateisinama.

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